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River Gum - Chapter Seven

Posted by omnipredation on 2007.11.09 at 14:07

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KitsuneTsuki
leoclanalpha at 2007-11-09 20:57 (UTC) (Link)
Im simply adoreing the mental trials you are bringing out... The child like enthusiasm of the girl with no name seems to just lighten the obvious depth of dispair you have created. I love it.

D.E.I.
omnipredation at 2007-11-09 20:59 (UTC) (Link)
I didn't think it was all that despairing... just fuckered up. She'll do a good job of tempering Nat's tendency to be kind of cynical about things. We'll see her again in a few more chapters. :)
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